I’M ONLY 20

Well, I’m 20

I have lived happy

Loved many

Felt crappy

Broken few

Been broken

But I still smile

I still live

Because there are many who no longer do

I still love

Because there are those who have never felt it

I still get to feel crappy

Because bad days are always right there

Life may not be clear

Mainly because I will still love

And for this I will still get burnt

But I’m only 20

And nobody gets to judge

Because being 20

I am allowed mistakes

I am allowed to bend some rules

Allowed to make my own decisions

So if you look this way 

And feel like walking away

I too will not judge

Sayonara

Till I’m older

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Juma Allan
Juma Allan
12/07/2017 4:50 pm

Nice piece of work

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
12/07/2017 5:04 pm
Reply to  Juma Allan

Thanks 😳😳😳

Daisyan
Daisyan
12/07/2017 5:02 pm

Amazing work, I also keep smiling whenever I read any of your work. Love it

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
12/07/2017 5:03 pm
Reply to  Daisyan

Thanks Daisy

Count decapro
Count decapro
12/07/2017 5:07 pm

I find your pieces inspirational yet comical ..jolie laide comes to mind.. You are an expert and 20 il call it genius

teddyleting
teddyleting
12/07/2017 5:47 pm

I can’t stop loving this beautiful mind 😍😍

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
12/07/2017 5:58 pm
Reply to  teddyleting

Teddy… You’re still my teacher here

teddyleting
teddyleting
12/07/2017 5:56 pm

Reblogged this on teddyleting and commented:
Someone see my lovely student and her sweet hand and beautiful brain…

Austeene
Austeene
12/07/2017 6:04 pm

good jo. Mirriam

Austeene
Austeene
12/07/2017 6:05 pm

great work. Mirriam

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
12/07/2017 6:15 pm
Reply to  Austeene

Thanks Austeene

Lameck
Lameck
12/07/2017 6:13 pm

You’re doing a fantastic dear, keep it on

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
12/07/2017 6:14 pm
Reply to  Lameck

Thanks Lameck

Lameck
Lameck
12/07/2017 9:14 pm

You’re doing a fantastic job my dear , keep it on

celineyuppie
celineyuppie
12/07/2017 7:09 pm

That’s a nice one darling. .

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
12/07/2017 7:11 pm
Reply to  celineyuppie

Thanks Celine

abelmasila
abelmasila
12/07/2017 8:13 pm

This is great Mish.. Forever young. 👍

Angel
Angel
13/07/2017 5:11 am

Nice piece..you ve given me motivation to pick up my pen alnd start writing again

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
13/07/2017 5:15 am
Reply to  Angel

Glad you like it that much

hemavravi
hemavravi
13/07/2017 9:44 am

Nice piece of work , I’m too 20 and i need a suggestion from you if you don’t mind !!! I’m new to this blogging and i have written a book review but i don’t have followers I feel so bad about it . can you guide me ?😍

mirabelaw
mirabelaw
13/07/2017 10:28 am
Reply to  hemavravi

Thanks. I’m also new to WordPress but I think it helps to share your posts with friends, and also via Facebook. You can also check out other bloggers and follow them to have them following you too

hemavravi
hemavravi
13/07/2017 11:22 am
Reply to  mirabelaw

Yep thanks a lot

hemavravi
hemavravi
13/07/2017 3:05 pm

Visit my blog Litcafé ☕ and give your suggestion !!!😍

Lindah
Lindah
13/07/2017 4:11 pm

Nice piece dear😘😘

sandrah
sandrah
14/07/2017 8:02 am

nice work
👌👐

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